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I Surrender Myself To You

My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender...

Also See: You Picked Me
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7 comments:

Kunal Malviya said... Reply To This Comment

Beautiful man... :)
Last two lines sum it all!

Jay_Dave said... Reply To This Comment

 Thanks Man, Same here, I liked last 2 lines the most... :) Thanks for commenting... :)

Saru said... Reply To This Comment

Lovely, the way you compared things with love. Ending was superb...:)

Jay_Dave said... Reply To This Comment

Yes, Ending catches the hearts... :)

Jen said... Reply To This Comment

Lovely poem!! :)

Jay_Dave said... Reply To This Comment

 Thank You... :)

Jay_Dave said... Reply To This Comment

 Thank You Jen... :)

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