I looked outside and watched the falling rain,
while deep inside I crumbled with pain.
My heart bleeds deep and breaks into a thousand pieces,
You've unleashed deep within me a hideous beast.
I believed in all the promises you gave to me,
I closed my eyes to all that hurts and refused to see.
that promises are made to be broken if it's founded with a lie,
I tried ignoring the truth as if it's a proverbial fly.
Now that I have no choice but to face it all,
try to smile to every one though the tears threatened to fall.
I tried to do my best and presented a strong facade,
but eventually I got tired of this hurting masquerade.
Now I learned my lesson in the hardest possible way,
the pain is real enough although others might say;
"Why not forget what happened and try to love again",
I've done that and I'm still trying hard my friend.
while deep inside I crumbled with pain.
My heart bleeds deep and breaks into a thousand pieces,
You've unleashed deep within me a hideous beast.
I believed in all the promises you gave to me,
I closed my eyes to all that hurts and refused to see.
that promises are made to be broken if it's founded with a lie,
I tried ignoring the truth as if it's a proverbial fly.
Now that I have no choice but to face it all,
try to smile to every one though the tears threatened to fall.
I tried to do my best and presented a strong facade,
but eventually I got tired of this hurting masquerade.
Now I learned my lesson in the hardest possible way,
the pain is real enough although others might say;
"Why not forget what happened and try to love again",
I've done that and I'm still trying hard my friend.
6 comments:
that is great poetry...."unleashed you have deep within me a hideous beast in recess" your last sentence of ist quart loved it,,,
Thanks Sunil.. :)
watching the rain after a break-up never usually works for me.. coz the rain is romantic :) but you've done the emotions much justice.. eloquent and imagery filled.
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
lovely lines :)
Thanks All... :)
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